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Super artificial intelligence named uin works for a trans national conspiracy “Operation Black Delta” to produce the DNA for a race of people so advanced they will make the rest of us obsolete After a vicious attack by Kiko a Korean cybernetic mafioso controlled by uin Nina b. In compliance with FTC guidelines I am disclosing that I received the book for free through Goodreads First ReadsReminiscent of authors Lisa Mason Robert Heinlein Robert Silverberg Greg Bear Piers AnthonyStats2 first person narratives1 third person narrative3 viewpoints totalTags Virtual Reality Eugenics Dystopia TEOTWAWKI Artificial Intelligence Drug Use Violence Sex for Hire06082013 646 AMI'm going to update my review as I read the book Why Because it's funIn this update I read The Future World Dispatch FWD The Georgia Guidestones GG and the chapter entitled A Brief HistoryThe Future World Dispatch and the Georgia Guidestones are spooky It's scary to think that world Mr Weatherby dreamed up has a basis in what the current trends are Good choices here Mr WeatherbyA Brief History ye gods the word choice and the word usage I'm reminded of the uote You keep using that word and I don't think it means what you think it means I got jolted out of my reader's daze repeatedly by poor word choice andor usage I mean it's close so I could decipher what he meant but that word does not go there Example and only example though there are many many Governments attempted other PASSIVITY measures Pacification measures anyone First of all passivity is a noun not an adjective Second of all passivity doesn't imply the idea of something resulting in less resistance the way that another word I stick by my choice of pacification XD would Did an editor work on this If so get a new editor Or you can find a crack team of beta readers willing to work for free What I liked I got the exposition all in one shot I feel like I understand the circumstances the characters are going to be operating under The stage is set06082013 523 PMIn this update I read the chapters Meat Hook Booty Bandits Angel City Guttersnipe and TransmogrifiedOkay say it with me now Ed I Tor Please for the love of spelling and grammar and to save a good story Think about how many readers will hit the first rough bits of prose and give up People have short attention spans nowadays you gotta keep the flow going or they'll split My example of typos and spell checking errors is where his should have been There were also some verb tense word choice and word usage issues but overall it was a vast vast vast improvement over the expository chapter Do I sense a late addition to the book the exposition Or I could have just gotten used to it Was Nina's near incomprehensible lingo naught but a stratagem to get me to accept the fact that these future people just don't talk right so I would move right along no longer bothering to note the relatively minor grammar and spelling faux pas because that's just how they do If so Sir I salute youSpeaking of near incomprehensible lingo when I was looking through the table of contents for the chapter titles I noticed a Glossary of Terms I briefly face palmed and then frantically flipped to it Yes it was short From now on you're going to be getting a running list of the words I would have liked to have understood at the time I'm also making my Very Own Acronym of that because it's way too long The acronym will be twiwhlthuatt because that's not unwieldy Also I am NOT reading that first chapter again hoping for greater comprehensionWith regard to invented dialects and salty speech I loved Blood Red Road Orleans and Child of Fortune but A Clockwork Orange was a total no go for me I think Nina's viewpoint would flow better for me if I weren't consciously analyzing she didn't use the right verb tense so was it on purpose or was it a mistake maybe it's just the way she talks Yeah that's not the best way to keep me in the storyOn to the charactersIn honor of the story being told in the first person the viewpoint characters are going to introduce themselvesHi my name is Nina life is generally out to fck me over but there's plenty of good things wamchakka My response to Nina Dear Nina I like you a lot so please stop using the words wamchakka and wammy because your constant overuse of these words makes the muscle behind my eye twitch Thank you Hi my name is Reg I'm a pretentious twat overly fond of big words who needs to be punched in the face If you could hear the way I think you would know why My response to Reg punches Reg in the face repeatedly Hi my name is uin I'm a creepy narcissistic stalker and voyeur I embrace my creepiness My response to uin slowly backs away I am not interesting to you not interesting at all runs and finallyUpdate sum up I like Nina she takes hard knocks and just keeps knocking back I don't like Reg even uin is sympathetic to me then Reg is and that's sad I liked the multitude of languages scattered through the text because it let me exercise my infinitesimal knowledge of said languages and gave the story a real melting pot kind of feeling I also just love languages I'm interested and it's a good story but the execution still a little lacking06092013 910 AMFinal Update I read the rest of the bookIt was too short The story's not done Whine whine whineFinal thoughtsTWIWHLTHUATT mali khat Wackenhut Coop I gave in and skimmed that first chapter again and then I was just in the zone and nothing else pinged meEditors are our friends They are giving loving people who reward us with candy andor cash money when we use them They give us massages with or without happy endings We will use editors or beta readers editors without title or pay in the futureNina is getting articulate as we go along See the author got tired of the wamchakkas too I want to punch uin in the face now too condescending bastard Reg has been upgraded to a pretentious TWIT He's such a throwaway character though aww tragedy aww I'm so bitter but I still can empathize with people's minor injuries as I cut out organs but oh no I don't KILL people not that Yeah definitely a twit And he's STILL so full of himself AaAargGgGgh punches Reg in the face Okay that was the last one for this book I swear it's out of my system nowuin was described as an irresponsible pervert playing God I want uin to respond Dude I am an irresponsible pervert playing GodNUMBER ONE FUNNY TYPO fowl instead of foul I lol'dCriticism The uinRegNina viewpoints have too much common word choices and usage between them Different characters should have different internal dialogues uin and Nina's dialogues were usually well differentiated but uin and Reg were blendy sometimes and even Nina started picking up words from the other two towards the end uin and Nina got blendy once and that was creepy and horrible and confusingWhile I was thrilled by the steadily declining occurrences of the wamchakka it's actually not a good sign I also noticed that the speaking of foreign tongues became and sporadic Basically I'm asking where's the consistency People's patterns of speech and internal dialogues don't change this fast Even Nina's use of the l33tspeak steadily declined Not Complaining Disappear it at the beginning too to make it all eualMy biggest wish is just that the vehicle you use to express yourself is able to keep up with your imagination so that I can fully submerge myself in that world because I'm the important one after all XD End CriticismI had a good time I want to read I went to website but no dice 4 FOUR starsand one last thingpunches Reg in the face What I lied so sue meand there that's the end there isn't any DISCLAIMER I FREELY USE AND ABUSE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR MY OWN AMUSEMENT

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Ecomes one of 1000 women in the world impregnated with this new genetic code But she is the only one to survive Hired by uin under false pretenses Reg tracks Nina down in the sprawling ghetto of Angel City unaware that an even dangerous plot threatens them and the rest of humanity. A mere 22 years into the future and things look pretty bleak The wealthy elite live in secluded paradise while all others deal with pollution and merciless Trog humans with cybernetic implants gangs This story follows Nina a dominatrix with an abused past She also thanks to a military mother is one of very few unsterilized women uin a crazy cyberstalker hires Reg under false pretenses to steal her womb While seeking shelter from a melee Reg discovers something even special than Nina’s ability to reproduceI felt like this book was 75% exposition Reg and Nina met up with like four chapters left Granted there was tons of action But there was also a lot of sexual violence I think one awful scene is uite enough Pretty sure the author was trying to show how strong Nina is to overcome it all but it was just too much for me Any woman to survive one such attack shows great inner strength as far as I’m concernedI want Nina to survive view spoilerAnd it was pretty heavily hinted that Reg is falling for her so aw or whatever hide spoiler Deathgame (Hardy Boys: Casefiles, years into the future and things look pretty bleak The wealthy elite live in secluded paradise while all others deal with pollution and merciless Trog humans with cybernetic implants gangs This story follows Nina a dominatrix with an abused past She also thanks to a military mother is one of very few unsterilized women uin a crazy cyberstalker hires Reg under false pretenses to steal her womb While seeking shelter from a melee Reg discovers something even special than Nina’s ability to reproduceI felt like this book was 75% exposition Reg and Nina met up with like four chapters left Granted there was tons of action But there was also a lot of sexual violence I think one awful scene is uite enough Pretty sure the author was trying to show how strong Nina is to overcome it all but it was just too much for me Any woman to survive one such attack shows great inner strength as far as I’m concernedI want Nina to survive view spoilerAnd it was pretty heavily hinted that Reg is falling for her so aw or whatever hide spoiler

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Los Angeles | 2035 Reg an organ thief and Nina a dominatrix struggle to survive in the ghettos of Los Angeles and in virtual worlds where outcasts seek refuge Their world has become an overpopulated nightmare where forced abortions and sterilizations are the norm Unknown to them a. In compliance with FTC guidelines I am disclosing that I received the book for free through Goodreads First ReadsReminiscent of authors Lisa Mason Robert Heinlein Robert Silverberg Greg Bear Piers AnthonyStats2 first person narratives1 third person narrative3 viewpoints totalTags Virtual Reality Eugenics Dystopia TEOTWAWKI Artificial Intelligence Drug Use Violence Sex for Hire06082013 646 AMI'm going to update my review as I read the book Why Because it's funIn this update I read The Future World Dispatch FWD The Georgia Guidestones GG and the chapter entitled A Brief HistoryThe Future World Dispatch and the Georgia Guidestones are spooky It's scary to think that world Mr Weatherby dreamed up has a basis in what the current trends are Good choices here Mr WeatherbyA Brief History ye gods the word choice and the word usage I'm reminded of the uote You keep using that word and I don't think it means what you think it means I got jolted out of my reader's daze repeatedly by poor word choice andor usage I mean it's close so I could decipher what he meant but that word does not go there Example and only example though there are many many Governments attempted other PASSIVITY measures Pacification measures anyone First of all passivity is a noun not an adjective Second of all passivity doesn't imply the idea of something resulting in less resistance the way that another word I stick by my choice of pacification XD would Did an editor work on this If so get a new editor Or you can find a crack team of beta readers willing to work for free What I liked I got the exposition all in one shot I feel like I understand the circumstances the characters are going to be operating under The stage is set06082013 523 PMIn this update I read the chapters Meat Hook Booty Bandits Angel City Guttersnipe and TransmogrifiedOkay say it with me now Ed I Tor Please for the love of spelling and grammar and to save a good story Think about how many readers will hit the first rough bits of prose and give up People have short attention spans nowadays you gotta keep the flow going or they'll split My example of typos and spell checking errors is where his should have been There were also some verb tense word choice and word usage issues but overall it was a vast vast vast improvement over the expository chapter Do I sense a late addition to the book the exposition Or I could have just gotten used to it Was Nina's near incomprehensible lingo naught but a stratagem to get me to accept the fact that these future people just don't talk right so I would move right along no longer bothering to note the relatively minor grammar and spelling faux pas because that's just how they do If so Sir I salute youSpeaking of near incomprehensible lingo when I was looking through the table of contents for the chapter titles I noticed a Glossary of Terms I briefly face palmed and then frantically flipped to it Yes it was short From now on you're going to be getting a running list of the words I would have liked to have understood at the time I'm also making my Very Own Acronym of that because it's way too long The acronym will be twiwhlthuatt because that's not unwieldy Also I am NOT reading that first chapter again hoping for greater comprehensionWith regard to invented dialects and salty speech I loved Blood Red Road Orleans and Child of Fortune but A Clockwork Orange was a total no go for me I think Nina's viewpoint would flow better for me if I weren't consciously analyzing she didn't use the right verb tense so was it on purpose or was it a mistake maybe it's just the way she talks Yeah that's not the best way to keep me in the storyOn to the charactersIn honor of the story being told in the first person the viewpoint characters are going to introduce themselvesHi my name is Nina life is generally out to fck me over but there's plenty of good things wamchakka My response to Nina Dear Nina I like you a lot so please stop using the words wamchakka and wammy because your constant overuse of these words makes the muscle behind my eye twitch Thank you Hi my name is Reg I'm a pretentious twat overly fond of big words who needs to be punched in the face If you could hear the way I think you would know why My response to Reg punches Reg in the face repeatedly Hi my name is uin I'm a creepy narcissistic stalker and voyeur I embrace my creepiness My response to uin slowly backs away I am not interesting to you not interesting at all runs and finallyUpdate sum up I like Nina she takes hard knocks and just keeps knocking back I don't like Reg even uin is sympathetic to me then Reg is and that's sad I liked the multitude of languages scattered through the text because it let me exercise my infinitesimal knowledge of said languages and gave the story a real melting pot kind of feeling I also just love languages I'm interested and it's a good story but the execution still a little lacking06092013 910 AMFinal Update I read the rest of the bookIt was too short The story's not done Whine whine whineFinal thoughtsTWIWHLTHUATT mali khat Wackenhut Coop I gave in and skimmed that first chapter again and then I was just in the zone and nothing else pinged meEditors are our friends They are giving loving people who reward us with candy andor cash money when we use them They give us massages with or without happy endings We will use editors or beta readers editors without title or pay in the futureNina is getting articulate as we go along See the author got tired of the wamchakkas too I want to punch uin in the face now too condescending bastard Reg has been upgraded to a pretentious TWIT He's such a throwaway character though aww tragedy aww I'm so bitter but I still can empathize with people's minor injuries as I cut out organs but oh no I don't KILL people not that Yeah definitely a twit And he's STILL so full of himself AaAargGgGgh punches Reg in the face Okay that was the last one for this book I swear it's out of my system nowuin was described as an irresponsible pervert playing God I want uin to respond Dude I am an irresponsible pervert playing GodNUMBER ONE FUNNY TYPO fowl instead of foul I lol'dCriticism The uinRegNina viewpoints have too much common word choices and usage between them Different characters should have different internal dialogues uin and Nina's dialogues were usually well differentiated but uin and Reg were blendy sometimes and even Nina started picking up words from the other two towards the end uin and Nina got blendy once and that was creepy and horrible and confusingWhile I was thrilled by the steadily declining occurrences of the wamchakka it's actually not a good sign I also noticed that the speaking of foreign tongues became and sporadic Basically I'm asking where's the consistency People's patterns of speech and internal dialogues don't change this fast Even Nina's use of the l33tspeak steadily declined Not Complaining Disappear it at the beginning too to make it all eualMy biggest wish is just that the vehicle you use to express yourself is able to keep up with your imagination so that I can fully submerge myself in that world because I'm the important one after all XD End CriticismI had a good time I want to read I went to website but no dice 4 FOUR starsand one last thingpunches Reg in the face What I lied so sue meand there that's the end there isn't any DISCLAIMER I FREELY USE AND ABUSE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR MY OWN AMUSEMENT Tinkle Tall Tales No. 2 ye gods the word choice and the word usage I'm reminded of the uote You keep using that word and I don't think it means what A Good Girls Guide to Murder you think it means I got jolted out of my reader's daze repeatedly by poor word choice andor usage I mean it's close so I could decipher what he meant but that word does not go there Example and only example though there are many many Governments attempted other PASSIVITY measures Pacification measures anyone First of all passivity is a noun not an adjective Second of all passivity doesn't imply the idea of something resulting in less resistance the way that another word I stick by my choice of pacification XD would Did an editor work on this If so get a new editor Or The Damned Lovely you can find a crack team of beta readers willing to work for free What I liked I got the exposition all in one shot I feel like I understand the circumstances the characters are going to be operating under The stage is set06082013 523 PMIn this update I read the chapters Meat Hook Booty Bandits Angel City Guttersnipe and TransmogrifiedOkay say it with me now Ed I Tor Please for the love of spelling and grammar and to save a good story Think about how many readers will hit the first rough bits of prose and give up People have short attention spans nowadays Handbook of Environmental and Ecological Statistics you gotta keep the flow going or they'll split My example of typos and spell checking errors is where his should have been There were also some verb tense word choice and word usage issues but overall it was a vast vast vast improvement over the expository chapter Do I sense a late addition to the book the exposition Or I could have just gotten used to it Was Nina's near incomprehensible lingo naught but a stratagem to get me to accept the fact that these future people just don't talk right so I would move right along no longer bothering to note the relatively minor grammar and spelling faux pas because that's just how they do If so Sir I salute The Tunnel youSpeaking of near incomprehensible lingo when I was looking through the table of contents for the chapter titles I noticed a Glossary of Terms I briefly face palmed and then frantically flipped to it Yes it was short From now on داستان زندگی پر ثمر و با افتخار مداد قرمز you're going to be getting a running list of the words I would have liked to have understood at the time I'm also making my Very Own Acronym of that because it's way too long The acronym will be twiwhlthuatt because that's not unwieldy Also I am NOT reading that first chapter again hoping for greater comprehensionWith regard to invented dialects and salty speech I loved Blood Red Road Orleans and Child of Fortune but A Clockwork Orange was a total no go for me I think Nina's viewpoint would flow better for me if I weren't consciously analyzing she didn't use the right verb tense so was it on purpose or was it a mistake maybe it's just the way she talks Yeah that's not the best way to keep me in the storyOn to the charactersIn honor of the story being told in the first person the viewpoint characters are going to introduce themselvesHi my name is Nina life is generally out to fck me over but there's plenty of good things wamchakka My response to Nina Dear Nina I like The Name Therapist you a lot so please stop using the words wamchakka and wammy because Watching My Wife in Jamaica your constant overuse of these words makes the muscle behind my eye twitch Thank Computing Across America you Hi my name is Reg I'm a pretentious twat overly fond of big words who needs to be punched in the face If Jasmine Becket-Griffith you could hear the way I think Keeping Up Appearances (English Edition) you would know why My response to Reg punches Reg in the face repeatedly Hi my name is uin I'm a creepy narcissistic stalker and voyeur I embrace my creepiness My response to uin slowly backs away I am not interesting to The Last Messiah you not interesting at all runs and finallyUpdate sum up I like Nina she takes hard knocks and just keeps knocking back I don't like Reg even uin is sympathetic to me then Reg is and that's sad I liked the multitude of languages scattered through the text because it let me exercise my infinitesimal knowledge of said languages and gave the story a real melting pot kind of feeling I also just love languages I'm interested and it's a good story but the execution still a little lacking06092013 910 AMFinal Update I read the rest of the bookIt was too short The story's not done Whine whine whineFinal thoughtsTWIWHLTHUATT mali khat Wackenhut Coop I gave in and skimmed that first chapter again and then I was just in the zone and nothing else pinged meEditors are our friends They are giving loving people who reward us with candy andor cash money when we use them They give us massages with or without happy endings We will use editors or beta readers editors without title or pay in the futureNina is getting articulate as we go along See the author got tired of the wamchakkas too I want to punch uin in the face now too condescending bastard Reg has been upgraded to a pretentious TWIT He's such a throwaway character though aww tragedy aww I'm so bitter but I still can empathize with people's minor injuries as I cut out organs but oh no I don't KILL people not that Yeah definitely a twit And he's STILL so full of himself AaAargGgGgh punches Reg in the face Okay that was the last one for this book I swear it's out of my system nowuin was described as an irresponsible pervert playing God I want uin to respond Dude I am an irresponsible pervert playing GodNUMBER ONE FUNNY TYPO fowl instead of foul I lol'dCriticism The uinRegNina viewpoints have too much common word choices and usage between them Different characters should have different internal dialogues uin and Nina's dialogues were usually well differentiated but uin and Reg were blendy sometimes and even Nina started picking up words from the other two towards the end uin and Nina got blendy once and that was creepy and horrible and confusingWhile I was thrilled by the steadily declining occurrences of the wamchakka it's actually not a good sign I also noticed that the speaking of foreign tongues became and sporadic Basically I'm asking where's the consistency People's patterns of speech and internal dialogues don't change this fast Even Nina's use of the l33tspeak steadily declined Not Complaining Disappear it at the beginning too to make it all eualMy biggest wish is just that the vehicle Sterrencommando (bruna science-fiction, you use to express The Origins of the Modern World yourself is able to keep up with Owning Their Pet: A Dark Sci-Fi Romance (Owned and Shared Book 1) (English Edition) your imagination so that I can fully submerge myself in that world because I'm the important one after all XD End CriticismI had a good time I want to read I went to website but no dice 4 FOUR starsand one last thingpunches Reg in the face What I lied so sue meand there that's the end there isn't any DISCLAIMER I FREELY USE AND ABUSE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR MY OWN AMUSEMENT


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  1. says:

    In compliance with FTC guidelines I am disclosing that I received the book for free through Goodreads First ReadsReminiscent of authors Lisa Mason Robert Heinlein Robert Silverberg Greg Bear Piers AnthonyStats2 first person narratives1 third person narrative3 viewpoints totalTags Virtual Reality Eugenics Dystopia TEOTWAWKI Artificial Intelligence Drug Use Violence Sex for Hire06082013 646 AMI'm going to update my review as I read the book Why? Because it's funIn this update I read The Future World Dispatch FWD The Georgia Guidestones GG and the chapter entitled A Brief HistoryThe Future World Dispatch and the Georgia Guidestones are spooky It's scary to think that world Mr Weatherby dreamed up has a basis in what the current trends are Good choices here Mr WeatherbyA Brief History ye gods the word choice and the word usage I'm reminded of the uote You keep using that word and I don't think it means what you think it means I got jolted out of my reader's daze repeatedly by poor word choice andor usage I mean it's close so I could decipher what he meant but that word does not go there Example and only example though there are many many Governments attempted other PASSIVITY measures Pacification measures anyone? First of all passivity is a noun not an adjective Second of all passivity doesn't imply the idea of something resulting in less resistance the way that another word I stick by my choice of pacification XD would Did an editor work on this? If so get a new editor Or you can find a crack team of beta readers willing to work for free What I liked I got the exposition all in one shot I feel like I understand the circumstances the characters are going to be operating under The stage is set06082013 523 PMIn this update I read the chapters Meat Hook Booty Bandits Angel City Guttersnipe and TransmogrifiedOkay say it with me now Ed I Tor Please for the love of spelling and grammar and to save a good story Think about how many readers will hit the first rough bits of prose and give up People have short attention spans nowadays you gotta keep the flow going or they'll split My example of typos and spell checking errors is where his should have been There were also some verb tense word choice and word usage issues but overall it was a vast vast vast improvement over the expository chapter Do I sense a late addition to the book the exposition? Or I could have just gotten used to it Was Nina's near incomprehensible lingo naught but a stratagem to get me to accept the fact that these future people just don't talk right so I would move right along no longer bothering to note the relatively minor grammar and spelling faux pas because that's just how they do? If so Sir I salute youSpeaking of near incomprehensible lingo when I was looking through the table of contents for the chapter titles I noticed a Glossary of Terms I briefly face palmed and then frantically flipped to it Yes it was short From now on you're going to be getting a running list of the words I would have liked to have understood at the time I'm also making my Very Own Acronym of that because it's way too long The acronym will be twiwhlthuatt because that's not unwieldy Also I am NOT reading that first chapter again hoping for greater comprehensionWith regard to invented dialects and salty speech I loved Blood Red Road Orleans and Child of Fortune but A Clockwork Orange was a total no go for me I think Nina's viewpoint would flow better for me if I weren't consciously analyzing she didn't use the right verb tense so was it on purpose or was it a mistake maybe it's just the way she talks? Yeah that's not the best way to keep me in the storyOn to the charactersIn honor of the story being told in the first person the viewpoint characters are going to introduce themselvesHi my name is Nina life is generally out to fck me over but there's plenty of good things wamchakka My response to Nina Dear Nina I like you a lot so please stop using the words wamchakka and wammy because your constant overuse of these words makes the muscle behind my eye twitch Thank you Hi my name is Reg I'm a pretentious twat overly fond of big words who needs to be punched in the face If you could hear the way I think you would know why My response to Reg punches Reg in the face repeatedly Hi my name is uin I'm a creepy narcissistic stalker and voyeur I embrace my creepiness My response to uin slowly backs away I am not interesting to you not interesting at all runs and finallyUpdate sum up I like Nina she takes hard knocks and just keeps knocking back I don't like Reg even uin is sympathetic to me then Reg is and that's sad I liked the multitude of languages scattered through the text because it let me exercise my infinitesimal knowledge of said languages and gave the story a real melting pot kind of feeling I also just love languages I'm interested and it's a good story but the execution still a little lacking06092013 910 AMFinal Update I read the rest of the bookIt was too short The story's not done Whine whine whineFinal thoughtsTWIWHLTHUATT mali khat Wackenhut Coop I gave in and skimmed that first chapter again and then I was just in the zone and nothing else pinged meEditors are our friends They are giving loving people who reward us with candy andor cash money when we use them They give us massages with or without happy endings We will use editors or beta readers editors without title or pay in the futureNina is getting articulate as we go along See the author got tired of the wamchakkas too I want to punch uin in the face now too condescending bastard Reg has been upgraded to a pretentious TWIT He's such a throwaway character though aww tragedy aww I'm so bitter but I still can empathize with people's minor injuries as I cut out organs but oh no I don't KILL people not that Yeah definitely a twit And he's STILL so full of himself AaAargGgGgh punches Reg in the face Okay that was the last one for this book I swear it's out of my system nowuin was described as an irresponsible pervert playing God I want uin to respond Dude I am an irresponsible pervert playing GodNUMBER ONE FUNNY TYPO fowl instead of foul I lol'dCriticism The uinRegNina viewpoints have too much common word choices and usage between them Different characters should have different internal dialogues uin and Nina's dialogues were usually well differentiated but uin and Reg were blendy sometimes and even Nina started picking up words from the other two towards the end uin and Nina got blendy once and that was creepy and horrible and confusingWhile I was thrilled by the steadily declining occurrences of the wamchakka it's actually not a good sign I also noticed that the speaking of foreign tongues became and sporadic Basically I'm asking where's the consistency? People's patterns of speech and internal dialogues don't change this fast Even Nina's use of the l33tspeak steadily declined Not Complaining Disappear it at the beginning too to make it all eualMy biggest wish is just that the vehicle you use to express yourself is able to keep up with your imagination so that I can fully submerge myself in that world because I'm the important one after all XD End CriticismI had a good time I want to read I went to website but no dice 4 FOUR starsand one last thingpunches Reg in the face What? I lied so sue meand there that's the end there isn't any DISCLAIMER I FREELY USE AND ABUSE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR MY OWN AMUSEMENT


  2. says:

    In compliance with FTC guidelines I am disclosing that I received the book for free through Goodreads First ReadsReminiscent of authors Lisa Mason Robert Heinlein Robert Silverberg Greg Bear Piers AnthonyStats2 first person narratives1 third person narrative3 viewpoints totalTags Virtual Reality Eugenics Dystopia TEOTWAWKI Artificial Intelligence Drug Use Violence Sex for Hire06082013 646 AMI'm going to update my review as I read the book Why? Because it's funIn this update I read The Future World Dispatch FWD The Georgia Guidestones GG and the chapter entitled A Brief HistoryThe Future World Dispatch and the Georgia Guidestones are spooky It's scary to think that world Mr Weatherby dreamed up has a basis in what the current trends are Good choices here Mr WeatherbyA Brief History ye gods the word choice and the word usage I'm reminded of the uote You keep using that word and I don't think it means what you think it means I got jolted out of my reader's daze repeatedly by poor word choice andor usage I mean it's close so I could decipher what he meant but that word does not go there Example and only example though there are many many Governments attempted other PASSIVITY measures Pacification measures anyone? First of all passivity is a noun not an adjective Second of all passivity doesn't imply the idea of something resulting in less resistance the way that another word I stick by my choice of pacification XD would Did an editor work on this? If so get a new editor Or you can find a crack team of beta readers willing to work for free What I liked I got the exposition all in one shot I feel like I understand the circumstances the characters are going to be operating under The stage is set06082013 523 PMIn this update I read the chapters Meat Hook Booty Bandits Angel City Guttersnipe and TransmogrifiedOkay say it with me now Ed I Tor Please for the love of spelling and grammar and to save a good story Think about how many readers will hit the first rough bits of prose and give up People have short attention spans nowadays you gotta keep the flow going or they'll split My example of typos and spell checking errors is where his should have been There were also some verb tense word choice and word usage issues but overall it was a vast vast vast improvement over the expository chapter Do I sense a late addition to the book the exposition? Or I could have just gotten used to it Was Nina's near incomprehensible lingo naught but a stratagem to get me to accept the fact that these future people just don't talk right so I would move right along no longer bothering to note the relatively minor grammar and spelling faux pas because that's just how they do? If so Sir I salute youSpeaking of near incomprehensible lingo when I was looking through the table of contents for the chapter titles I noticed a Glossary of Terms I briefly face palmed and then frantically flipped to it Yes it was short From now on you're going to be getting a running list of the words I would have liked to have understood at the time I'm also making my Very Own Acronym of that because it's way too long The acronym will be twiwhlthuatt because that's not unwieldy Also I am NOT reading that first chapter again hoping for greater comprehensionWith regard to invented dialects and salty speech I loved Blood Red Road Orleans and Child of Fortune but A Clockwork Orange was a total no go for me I think Nina's viewpoint would flow better for me if I weren't consciously analyzing she didn't use the right verb tense so was it on purpose or was it a mistake maybe it's just the way she talks? Yeah that's not the best way to keep me in the storyOn to the charactersIn honor of the story being told in the first person the viewpoint characters are going to introduce themselvesHi my name is Nina life is generally out to fck me over but there's plenty of good things wamchakka My response to Nina Dear Nina I like you a lot so please stop using the words wamchakka and wammy because your constant overuse of these words makes the muscle behind my eye twitch Thank you Hi my name is Reg I'm a pretentious twat overly fond of big words who needs to be punched in the face If you could hear the way I think you would know why My response to Reg punches Reg in the face repeatedly Hi my name is uin I'm a creepy narcissistic stalker and voyeur I embrace my creepiness My response to uin slowly backs away I am not interesting to you not interesting at all runs and finallyUpdate sum up I like Nina she takes hard knocks and just keeps knocking back I don't like Reg even uin is sympathetic to me then Reg is and that's sad I liked the multitude of languages scattered through the text because it let me exercise my infinitesimal knowledge of said languages and gave the story a real melting pot kind of feeling I also just love languages I'm interested and it's a good story but the execution still a little lacking06092013 910 AMFinal Update I read the rest of the bookIt was too short The story's not done Whine whine whineFinal thoughtsTWIWHLTHUATT mali khat Wackenhut Coop I gave in and skimmed that first chapter again and then I was just in the zone and nothing else pinged meEditors are our friends They are giving loving people who reward us with candy andor cash money when we use them They give us massages with or without happy endings We will use editors or beta readers editors without title or pay in the futureNina is getting articulate as we go along See the author got tired of the wamchakkas too I want to punch uin in the face now too condescending bastard Reg has been upgraded to a pretentious TWIT He's such a throwaway character though aww tragedy aww I'm so bitter but I still can empathize with people's minor injuries as I cut out organs but oh no I don't KILL people not that Yeah definitely a twit And he's STILL so full of himself AaAargGgGgh punches Reg in the face Okay that was the last one for this book I swear it's out of my system nowuin was described as an irresponsible pervert playing God I want uin to respond Dude I am an irresponsible pervert playing GodNUMBER ONE FUNNY TYPO fowl instead of foul I lol'dCriticism The uinRegNina viewpoints have too much common word choices and usage between them Different characters should have different internal dialogues uin and Nina's dialogues were usually well differentiated but uin and Reg were blendy sometimes and even Nina started picking up words from the other two towards the end uin and Nina got blendy once and that was creepy and horrible and confusingWhile I was thrilled by the steadily declining occurrences of the wamchakka it's actually not a good sign I also noticed that the speaking of foreign tongues became and sporadic Basically I'm asking where's the consistency? People's patterns of speech and internal dialogues don't change this fast Even Nina's use of the l33tspeak steadily declined Not Complaining Disappear it at the beginning too to make it all eualMy biggest wish is just that the vehicle you use to express yourself is able to keep up with your imagination so that I can fully submerge myself in that world because I'm the important one after all XD End CriticismI had a good time I want to read I went to website but no dice 4 FOUR starsand one last thingpunches Reg in the face What? I lied so sue meand there that's the end there isn't any DISCLAIMER I FREELY USE AND ABUSE THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE FOR MY OWN AMUSEMENT


  3. says:

    A mere 22 years into the future and things look pretty bleak The wealthy elite live in secluded paradise while all others deal with pollution and merciless Trog humans with cybernetic implants gangs This story follows Nina a dominatrix with an abused past She also thanks to a military mother is one of very few unsterilized women uin a crazy cyberstalker hires Reg under false pretenses to steal her womb While seeking shelter from a melee Reg discovers something even special than Nina’s ability to reproduceI felt like this book was 75% exposition Reg and Nina met up with like four chapters left Granted there was tons of action But there was also a lot of sexual violence I think one awful scene is uite enough Pretty sure the author was trying to show how strong Nina is to overcome it all but it was just too much for me Any woman to survive one such attack shows great inner strength as far as I’m concernedI want Nina to survive view spoilerAnd it was pretty heavily hinted that Reg is falling for her so aw or whatever hide spoiler


  4. says:

    I won this book on Good reads Thank you to the author This is a futuristic novel with very interesting characters indeed The only problem isit is to be continued And I hate that because I want to know now what happens to Nina Oh well nevertheless I enjoyed thebook Thank you


  5. says:

    Interesting and somewhat plausible world The writing needs some work though


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